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-#### The spirit of M3P2 is represented by its logo
+#### The spirit of M3P2 is embodied in its logo
 
-* **3 simples figures...** *that seem to be mutually exclusive,*
+* **3 simple figures...** *that seem to be mutually exclusive,*
 
 ![](Esprit_m3p2-introduction-3-figures-simples_L774.jpg)
 
-* to symbolize **a more complex reality**, *to understand.*
+* which symbolize **a more complex reality**, *to comprehend*.
 
 ![](Esprit_m3p2-introduction-complex-reality_L774.gif)
 
-* *For that*, **3 challenges await me :**
+* *Thus, **3 challenges await me :**
 
 
 #### 1 : A challenge for myself
 
-**Deepen my thought** :
-* Relativize my first certainties.
+**Deepen my thinking** :
+* •	Put my initial assumptions into perspective.
 * Change my point of view.
 * Test my understanding and knowledge. 
 
 ![](Esprit_m3p2-solo_L1000-v3.gif)
 
-#### 2 - Peaceful relationships 
+#### 2 - Peaceful relationships
 
-**Confidence** in what, **together, we can perceive
-and undertake** :
-*  Consider the other's point of view.
-*  Confront our visions.
-*  Broaden my own understanding.
+Have **confidence** in what **we can perceive and undertake together by** :
+
+**Confidence** in what, **together, we can perceive**
+and **undertake** by :
+*  Considering the point of view of others.
+*  Comparing our perspectives.
+*  Broadening my own understanding.
 
 ![](Esprit_m3p2-ensemble-L600_v4.gif)
 
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 **Observe** :
 * Observe the phenomena.
-* The object of observation is the perceived sensible reality.
-* Search for unifying principles under the multiplicity of phenomena.
+* The object of observation is the perceived or measured sensible reality.
+* Search for unifying principles among numerous phenomena.
 
 **Interpret and model** :
 * Interpret the observations in terms of concepts, principles and laws.
 * Build a mathematical model.
-* Use it to make measurable predictions.
+* Use the model to make measurable predictions.
 
-**Question and confront** :
-* Interrogate the Nature on specific questions through experimentations.
-* Measure the response of the Nature to the experiments.
-* Compare the measurements with the predictions, the Nature's behavior with the models.
+**Question and compare** :
+* Examine specific aspects of Nature through experimentation.
+* Measure how Nature responds to experimentation.
+* Compare measurements with predictions and Nature’s behavior with the model.
 
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